Sorrow--the story of a mare.

Name:Broken Spirit
Age:6
Breed:Andalusian
Color:Grey
Gender:Stallion
Mame/Tail:Grey
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His history:


Broken Spirit was NOTthe typicall all over mares type, he had a free willing, happy spirit, untill someone had captured him, scars were all on his hide, and his mane was tangled and teisted, his eyes were glossed with pain, and his legs were scared with whip marks,, Humans tortured him, and mde him fight till he bled...he was too kind to fight, his heart swelled with anger one day, he had lashed out at a human, That was the nearest death position he ever had, he used to live on a island When their was richly green and nice,Ringed with pure white sands.At dawn, at noon and at sunset a faint fluting sound drifted from this island like a beckoning call.To to birds flying high, they looked like jeweleled eggs, cupped in nests of foam and scattered on a broad blue plain.But he was taken, his friends and small family was taken away one by one, after he had left the humans, life was hard for him, but now, hes in search for a new life...


Sprit hung his scared head, and dragged his aching hooves on the ground, that escape was lifetaking, but he had made it.Pain spun through his body like ice hitting you're back and scratching you. He whimpered softly and sighed, He buckled to the ground, he struggled to stand again, a trat spun down his cheek and splashed to the ground, He looked up and seen water, he used some of the last bit of enerjy and gulped down the cool water.

Name:Dakota [Is name WAS Spirit but Frie Frie is usin it]
Gender:Stallion
Breed:Mustang
Age:7
Height:16.1'hh
Mate:
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Dakota walked alone through a damp, misty field, his legs were wet, he shook his mane.

Name:Mystic October *October*
Gender:Mare
Breed:Unknown
Age:6
Height:16'8 hh
Mate:.....
Picture:
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October's story is quite tragic, it all started when she was born on halloween night. Her parents were too busy with the others to notice her, yes, there was others. October had issues with getting along with others, but those cleared once she became a loner. So even when October begged and pleaded for something, her parents ignored her. About when she was 2 her father had died, he was struck by lightening and his injuries were untreatable. So that marked the beginning of her horrible problems. Despite her look, she wasn't really that retched, she was very beautiful but you would have to reach down deep to find it. She was overly skinny with a tangled mane and tail. When October reached the age of 5, her mother died from a cougar attack. That's also why October has a scar on her stomach running half the length. Now she's six and is trying to find a better way of life, along with caring friends and 'family.' She's quite pretty now, great conformation, wavy mane and tail, and a loving heart for the open.

Dakota saw the mare and perked his ears up, he heard her screams and flicked his ears back, then bolted at the stallion, lunging out at him then stopping, not touching the stallion "Leave her alone!!" he snorted with his teeth bared and ears back.

Dakota looked at her, confused aswell "Sorry..." he said and backed up and walked away.

[You all leave! i was here 1st T.T]



spirit looked at the other stallion in an i dont care kinda way, He wasen't the typicall Protectorn unless he got a mate, he was still strong compared to a full strenght stallion, he sighed and looked at the growing dark sky, then muttered ..Only if you knew you stupid horse.. he was talking about the stallion that almost hit him, and he wasen't afraid, he stood still and stomped his hoof, feeling the andalusian's strength pourinto him, he reared but no neigh, he had a scratch along his stomach, and is still healing, he came to the ground and lye down, he will let her come to him,He won't come to her immedietly.

(heh i was hoping this would be a big rp but whateva )

Sorrow was curious. She got up and walked catiously towards the first stallion, thinking that he was dead. She lowered her muzzle and said "Are you..........ok?". She lay down a safe distance away and watched him.

Silky sighed and went to check out the other stallion, to see if he meant harm or not. She stopped near his hooves and called "Who are you?"

[Whats a Bloodmoss? ]

[Im bout to quit...]

Dakota rolled his eyes, he could tell that stallion was the drumatic one, he didnt care, he walked away, his brown eyes watched his surroundings, his ears listened greatly, his tail cascaded along the ground, and his mane blew along his neck.

[By the way Friesian, you cant tell anyone to quit, thats rude and selfish, just because you were here first, you are also saying that to the Admin, try it again and see what happens]

[as in saying i never usually Rp with Twi, that's all PD]

[And i wasen't being rude nor selfish, i wasen't trying to be anyway.Just making a point]

[Okay, I was just saying, I found that selfish but Thank you for keeping your cool]