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Post  TwilightApple on Tue Jun 17, 2008 2:00 am

Name: Sorrow
Gender: Mare
Breed: Arab
Age: 6
Personality: You will find out.....
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Once upon a time, there was a pure black mare named Sorrow. Sorrow was beautiful, as beautiful as a budding rose, with a mane and tail as black as coal and a coat as slick and shiny as a black pearl. Her eyes shone with knowledge and her hooves made no sound, even when she cantered upon rock. She was hunted by both stallions and humans who wanted her for her beauty. Yet she did not love any of them and she lived in constant fear. She was lonely and had one friend and this was the black hare named Silky. This is their story:

Sorrow swayed in the meadow. Her head was pounding from another flight away from a prospective stallion. She swung around wearily and crept into the trees where she could sleep peacefully. She dropped down and sighed, her old wound had re-opened and was throbbing. Tears glittered on her face as she wished for a better life.

Silky followed Sorrow. Her paws were bleeding from the long run but she would never leave the mare. She snuggled close to her face, her warm body pulsating heat onto Sorrow's face as she kept her ears erect, to listen for any sounds in the night.
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Post  FriesianFantasy on Tue Jun 17, 2008 1:08 pm

Name:Broken Spirit
Age:6
Breed:Andalusian
Color:Grey
Gender:Stallion
Mame/Tail:Grey
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Broken Spirit was NOTthe typicall all over mares type, he had a free willing, happy spirit, untill someone had captured him, scars were all on his hide, and his mane was tangled and teisted, his eyes were glossed with pain, and his legs were scared with whip marks,, Humans tortured him, and mde him fight till he bled...he was too kind to fight, his heart swelled with anger one day, he had lashed out at a human, That was the nearest death position he ever had, he used to live on a island When their was richly green and nice,Ringed with pure white sands.At dawn, at noon and at sunset a faint fluting sound drifted from this island like a beckoning call.To to birds flying high, they looked like jeweleled eggs, cupped in nests of foam and scattered on a broad blue plain.But he was taken, his friends and small family was taken away one by one, after he had left the humans, life was hard for him, but now, hes in search for a new life...


Sprit hung his scared head, and dragged his aching hooves on the ground, that escape was lifetaking, but he had made it.Pain spun through his body like ice hitting you're back and scratching you. He whimpered softly and sighed, He buckled to the ground, he struggled to stand again, a trat spun down his cheek and splashed to the ground, He looked up and seen water, he used some of the last bit of enerjy and gulped down the cool water.
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Post  TwilightApple on Wed Jun 18, 2008 1:47 am

Silky jerked awake. There was another horse in the clearing. She stood up tall and perked her ears to catch any sounds.....there it was again! The sound of hooves......now a gulp...possibly from the pond. She hopped out the scrub and saw a grey, almost white stallion drinking at the pool. She glided back to Sorrow and whispered into her ears "There is a stallion in the clearing."

Sorrow shot awake and stood up slowly- so she did not crack any twigs. Her breathing sharpened as she saw the stallion drinking. Suddenly, something clicked.......she felt as though she knew the stallion.........but no, all stallions were pains to be avoided. She spun around to gallop from the clearing and in the process, she hit a great branch and snapped it; the sound screeched around the clearing. She panicked and slipped on some wet leaves landing on her back. She kicked a few times before getting up and cantering into the next clearing over. He would follow that was for sure, but she was exhausted.
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Post  FriesianFantasy on Wed Jun 18, 2008 5:21 am

Spirit raised his weak head slowly, The wind blew his mane, and revealed the suffering from long ago, And looked at her for a moment, his eyes shown no emotion...Just pain, wen he tried to move away, he buckled to his front knees, from the 7 mile gallop for his own life,He looked away, struggling to stand up again, he had fallen on rocks, so his side was a bit bloody, his ears were forwards and no expressions appeared, he limped twords the grass, oppasite directon of her, heneighd in pain, it felt like a rock was dropped on his back, but their wasen't, he fell onto his side, e flattened one ear, and pushed himself to get up, he did, but he ached badly, and lowered his neck which was throbbing to the ground, slowly starting to eat
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Post  Chimera on Wed Jun 18, 2008 3:18 pm

Name:Dakota [Is name WAS Spirit but Frie Frie is usin it]
Gender:Stallion
Breed:Mustang
Age:7
Height:16.1'hh
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Dakota walked alone through a damp, misty field, his legs were wet, he shook his mane.

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Post  TwilightApple on Wed Jun 18, 2008 7:50 pm

Sorrow saw the other stallion fall onto his side. She whimpered and had last thoughts about turning back. She was so confused that she flopped down on the grass and started to cry. What was these feelings? Suddenly she saw another stallion appear and she jerked up "Oh......no....." she was hysterical "They're all after me......." she tried to get up but her legs trembled. She lurched up and ran to the near trees, panting.

Silky was scared. She saw her friend fall in confusion and it scared her. She ran off and pushed into the mare's leg "Please.........move.........we have to leave!"
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Post  FriesianFantasy on Wed Jun 18, 2008 8:05 pm

Spirit raised his head again ''I won't hurt you'' he mumbled but loud enough to hear, his merkey grey coat was slightly shiney, and his eyes telling the truth he calmly moved forwards, every step felt like a knife going into his side, he sighed and looked at her ''You don't ave to trust me, but i won't hurt you'' he felt achey, he needed to heal, he walked with his hooves dragging on the soft ground, and turnt his head, pain just struck through him, he couldent ignore it, he had a Head full of stress, body full of pain, and a hand full of anger held in his broad chest, the wind moved a patch of mane on his forhead, refealing a lightnening like looking scar
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Post  TwilightApple on Thu Jun 19, 2008 1:41 am

Sorrow's legs trembled as she threw her head around "You will! You will! They all did! ALL OF THEM!" she sobbed. This stallion was interesting but she was in a state of panic. She whimpered as she looked to her side and saw her wound festering on her side. She looked sideways at the other stallion and panted "You're together..............you want to hurt me.......no....NO!"

Silkly butted her head onto the mare's face. Tears were streaming from her eyes "Move.........please......." she groaned. She had never seen Sorrow like this before....never....
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Post  FriesianFantasy on Thu Jun 19, 2008 4:33 am

Spirit sighed slowly, and looked her in the eyes. Not in a rude, or wanting way, but a calm serious way, then he kept his gaze down,He had a cracked hoof, so when he went to walk...A scream of pain spun from his mouth..That hurt him badly.He had to limp whatsoever on 3 legs, he shook his snarled mane, revealing scars, and he had a rather cute disposition, but who cared for him? his mother and father didint...
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Post  Mini on Thu Jun 19, 2008 2:03 pm

Name:Mystic October *October*
Gender:Mare
Breed:Unknown
Age:6
Height:16'8 hh
Mate:.....
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October's story is quite tragic, it all started when she was born on halloween night. Her parents were too busy with the others to notice her, yes, there was others. October had issues with getting along with others, but those cleared once she became a loner. So even when October begged and pleaded for something, her parents ignored her. About when she was 2 her father had died, he was struck by lightening and his injuries were untreatable. So that marked the beginning of her horrible problems. Despite her look, she wasn't really that retched, she was very beautiful but you would have to reach down deep to find it. She was overly skinny with a tangled mane and tail. When October reached the age of 5, her mother died from a cougar attack. That's also why October has a scar on her stomach running half the length. Now she's six and is trying to find a better way of life, along with caring friends and 'family.' She's quite pretty now, great conformation, wavy mane and tail, and a loving heart for the open.


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Post  Chimera on Thu Jun 19, 2008 4:37 pm

Dakota saw the mare and perked his ears up, he heard her screams and flicked his ears back, then bolted at the stallion, lunging out at him then stopping, not touching the stallion "Leave her alone!!" he snorted with his teeth bared and ears back.

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Post  TwilightApple on Thu Jun 19, 2008 5:18 pm

Sorrow screamed and cried "There are so many..........." she was so confused. The other stallion lunging towards the first one scared her and she was so scared, crying and going crazy. She was so confused, because the stallions were being nice to her........"You all want something from me!" she cried.

Silky was also very confused, she noticed the other mare and knew that this could only get worse. She had given up and was sitting back on her haunches wondering what to do.
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Post  Chimera on Thu Jun 19, 2008 7:09 pm

Dakota looked at her, confused aswell "Sorry..." he said and backed up and walked away.

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Post  TwilightApple on Thu Jun 19, 2008 9:58 pm

Sorrow sighed "Ok.......Silky I am sorry.....". She looked at the other stallions and winced "Sorry......stallions scare me....."

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Post  FriesianFantasy on Fri Jun 20, 2008 4:36 am

[You all leave! i was here 1st T.T]



spirit looked at the other stallion in an i dont care kinda way, He wasen't the typicall Protectorn unless he got a mate, he was still strong compared to a full strenght stallion, he sighed and looked at the growing dark sky, then muttered ..Only if you knew you stupid horse.. he was talking about the stallion that almost hit him, and he wasen't afraid, he stood still and stomped his hoof, feeling the andalusian's strength pourinto him, he reared but no neigh, he had a scratch along his stomach, and is still healing, he came to the ground and lye down, he will let her come to him,He won't come to her immedietly.
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Post  TwilightApple on Fri Jun 20, 2008 6:10 pm

(heh i was hoping this would be a big rp but whateva Very Happy)

Sorrow was curious. She got up and walked catiously towards the first stallion, thinking that he was dead. She lowered her muzzle and said "Are you..........ok?". She lay down a safe distance away and watched him.

Silky sighed and went to check out the other stallion, to see if he meant harm or not. She stopped near his hooves and called "Who are you?"
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Post  FriesianFantasy on Sat Jun 21, 2008 8:00 am

Spirit raised his head slowly, and seen the hair, he slightly smiled and then said ''Broken Spirit'' he rested his head down again, he didin't get up just yet, he didin't want to hurt the small Hair, he loked at Sorrow ''I feel eerie pain...I am barley at the brink of living, but im healing slowly..'' he said, he took a deep breath and rested his head down again, his body still and his eyes looking straight at the sky then at sillky, but he shut his eyes and breathed
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Post  TwilightApple on Sun Jun 22, 2008 1:08 am

Sorrow winced and looked at him "Oh........how.......how did this happen?". She noticed that Silky wasn't running away so he must not be dangerous......She snorted and wriggled closer to the stallion. "Silky, can you smell any bloodmoss? That should soak the blood up and help seal the cuts...."

Silky looked at the stallion and nodded at Sorrow "Yes.........there is some just near the pool here.....should I get cobwebs as well?". The mare nodded and she went to pull some thick webs down and gather some bloodmoss which she gave to Sorrow "Here...."

Sorrow pressed the bloodmoss into his cuts and placed cobwebs on top of it "Oh, if only there were honey nearby.........we will have to change the dressing everyday"

"We?" Silky thought "She is interested.......that is different........". She looked at Sorrow "I think there was a bee hive back there but we will have to wait until dawn........oh! He says his name is Broken Spirit........"

Sorrow murmured "Broken.........just like my heart....." she looked at the stars and looked back down at him.
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Post  FriesianFantasy on Sun Jun 22, 2008 7:32 am

Spirit peered open his eyes, he looked at Sillky and sorrow, he smiled slightly ''Honey is over tther..'' e sighed and eased with pain, but he did not move, he moved his ears once in a while, he lifted his head, and looked as Sillky, then at Sorrow with calm eyes, then he let his head fall to the ground again''Huumans..did this..Took my family and kkilled them..Then tortured me''
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Post  FriesianFantasy on Sun Jun 22, 2008 7:34 am

[Whats a Bloodmoss? Very Happy]
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Post  Chimera on Sun Jun 22, 2008 8:39 am

[Im bout to quit...]

Dakota rolled his eyes, he could tell that stallion was the drumatic one, he didnt care, he walked away, his brown eyes watched his surroundings, his ears listened greatly, his tail cascaded along the ground, and his mane blew along his neck.

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Post  Chimera on Sun Jun 22, 2008 8:52 am

[By the way Friesian, you cant tell anyone to quit, thats rude and selfish, just because you were here first, you are also saying that to the Admin, try it again and see what happens]

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Post  FriesianFantasy on Sun Jun 22, 2008 9:51 am

[as in saying i never usually Rp with Twi, that's all PD]
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Post  FriesianFantasy on Sun Jun 22, 2008 9:51 am

[And i wasen't being rude nor selfish, i wasen't trying to be anyway.Just making a point]
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Post  Chimera on Sun Jun 22, 2008 10:04 am

[Okay, I was just saying, I found that selfish but Thank you for keeping your cool]

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